So MaryAnne, I have read this once to twice a day since you've post and I apologize but I literally can't seem to comment..usually it may take me a day or so when something blows me away to comment, but still, I just don't know what to say....I definitely DONT want to critique it, sometimes are jumbled writings are written exactly how they are..

Where has the ocean
opened? Because I cannot
find the carvings we made
while sprouting feet
and walking on waves.

^^ GAHHHHH What is this??? I mean seriously there is nothing I can say because I can't seem to pick my jaw off the floor...I am in love that stanza....sprouting feet, theres something about that wording I love...

Youre such a star girl! You seriously are!