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by Chelsey
I love this piece dear!! Omgosh the beauty in the imagery is just profound..howeverfragile arts of nature are born ^ has 8 syllables and it should have 7 ..Think of some rewording that wouldnt take away the stunningness of this... Perhaps: nature births us fragile art. Aside from that, this is an excellent nature piece :)
by Meena Krish
Casting frigid winds, where white blankets cover land, ^^A nice opening for the reader to see a winter scene and feel the biting wind..very nice! -A kiss of winter- ^^I like this line. Just imagine the land to be kissed by winter..cool kiss..liked this! fragile arts of nature born breathed by winters cold embrace. ^^The closing draws a nice picture where one sits and watch the once green beauty been "embraced" by a cold cold embrace. Enjoyed the read :)