Bottled Fragrance of Perfection (she is one of kind)

by ControlRobot   Nov 6, 2012


How exquisite is her mild nature?
The charisma in her presence illuminates the atmosphere
The radiance in her smile projects luminous beauty
The melodic tunes in her voice create heavenly symphonies
And the innocent enigma in her eyes leaves one intrigued

A magnificent articulation in the words she dares to speak
And a refinement in the sense she makes in every short speech
She is one of a kind

The rejuvenating rhythm in the way she walks,
Swirling and turning in the harmony of the rhythmic winds
Making the ground quiver under her delicate feet
And the luring shimmers of her stunning legs
Waking the brown dormant plants along her merited path
Under which she walks

The enchantment of her captivating soft lips
The loveliness of her smooth, elegant fingers
The caressing touch of her tender loving hands
Oh! She is one of a kind

Trust in her loving heart
Love in her day to day life
Happiness in her out layer
Perfection in her huge flaws
She is just a bottled fragrance of perfection
She is one of a kind

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    In the first stanza, I love how in each line, there is a direct connection with the words you choose. "radiance: luminous", "melodic tunes: symphonies", etc.

    "Making the ground quiver under her delicate feet"
    ^^^^^ I love this line. Not only is it an oxymoron but it shows the true amount of care you have for her, making her seem larger than life. It's a very sweet line but put into a poetic sense that it doesn't clearly show the reader the true meaning [or maybe it's just what I am getting from it :P].

    "The enchantment of her captivating soft lips
    The loveliness of her smooth, elegant fingers
    The caressing touch of her tender loving hands
    Oh! She is one of a kind"

    ^^^^^^^^ I loved this stanza. The way you describe her physical appeal yet in such a simple, sweet and not too inappropriate manner is really sweet. Also plays back into the feelings you have for her.

    Overall, the poem is sweet and romantic, to say the least. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Very romantic!
    You have an exquisite use of word usage throughout the whole poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen

    I love your poems, too. It seems that you are an experienced writer, as well.

    This was a lovely read. Loved the diction, and intese emotions being portrayed here.

    Keep it up!

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