Human, three thirds (free verse)

I like this piece as well, such truth. I think it'd be really interesting if there was more elaboration in this piece though about each of the thirds. Maybe for a second poem?

Good work though!

I dont quite understand it . but what i did get from it was the dad was saying to the son to make the most of yourself

And a third to the worms..

the soul goes up(heaven) or down(hell), the body remains to adhere to the ground and the work one developed on earth will either be remember or forgotten according to how good one did it.

Three things that one should focus on while on earth. Well done.

Good share of a hadith in a poem... I want to share hadiths too... Sir, you have written something very beautiful... This is a divine message and I would nominate this....:)