Comments : This is a love poem

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen

    Yaki, every word that comes out of your mouth is virtually poetic and sometimes I wonder if there is anything you cannot write about.

    This is a love poem, indeed, though it only describes the sadness of feeling lonely and loving someone or some things that is/are not yours.

    Your ending lines were powerful as they conveyed the dramatic and emotional intensity in this piece.

    :)