Surreal heart

by Karla   Nov 7, 2012


Can you help me take off the clothes of the day
and dishevel the night?
Maybe we can put lipstick on the lips of life
or do a face peeling on Madame Death.

Tomorrow shan't be like today:
I will have 2 inches of poetic words
and 3 bucks of metaphors.
My feet will dream about distant melted lands.
My body will make love to fleeting images
of Rene Magritte.

I won't be here anymore:
My home is where the winds sweep the angels
as you invent me.

Can you help me to hypnotize devil in me
and deconstruct my brain waves?

I am looking for polarities and bi-dimensional hearts.
I am in need of a decontextualised moment.

Karla Bardanza

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Poem #4
*Written for the Raven's "one a day" through November.

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  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Karla this Is so unique I love it ,
    Such images I loved the lipstick on life's lips and
    Peel madam death , such an explosive
    Piece

    Love your work

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I wonder why I didn't read this.

    You may be tired of my comments which do not provide you with 1% interpretation, but I just can't... you'll always stay my #1 poetess.

    I am so happy that you are my friend, and at the same time, I'm so happy that you are so very talented. Latin women are beyond cleverness and passion. ;)

    * Can you help me to take....
    = I think the 'to' is unnecessary

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Wow

    I love Rene Magritte, especially the floating castles on rocks, he had a thing about apples as well.

    This poem is as surreal as his artwork

    great write again

  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    I read this poem on the thread and fell in love. I dont know what it is about it.... using life and death in the first stanza... putting lipstick on the lips of life... 2 inches, 3 bucks... all of it is just beautiful... great job Karla. Very sophisticated.

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