This is awesome, you're like Jesus in this poem, walking on water and all!! That's totally the image I got hehe

Tony this piece is perfect. I wouldn't add anything or shorten anything, I think its beautifully simplistic and describes such a passion filled love that makes you want to walk on water.

Awesome :)

I dig the way you used very few words to describe how this love is not bound by laws of gravity.

Your writes are evolving Tony.
(Even though I've only been around a few months, I see it.)

P.S. sore should be soar.

Well penned. =)

I like this. It shows few words, but with where my heart rests in life right now the interpretation I got from this went deep! I 'heard' you say that nothing is impossible when it comes to love. That I shall not have wings, yet I can still fly. And how water is not solid but I can still walk on it like it was a sidewalk.

I enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing!

*BrittBratt*