I love this poem, it has so much meaning, and speaks so much beauty, life packs so much weight upon you, but someway, someday, something will take it away!! Great job, can't wait to read more of your talent filled work |
Oh jeez now I'm embarressed lol... Thank you very kindly ma'am life can just get alittle stressful...alot sometimes. |
Funny thing is I was trying to write a song when I wrote this....but I gave up and turned it into a poem.....still has a lot of meaning to me tho.... |
by DeviousCharmer
Totally love this. Very deep and dark. you express your self very well. hope everything gets better :) |
I thank you kindly....it seems most of my poems are dark...I think I vent thru the writing is why. |
by Aubrey
I love it!!!! So relatable :D good write:) |
by Em
Sounds like me right now. Good write ðŸ' keep it up |
I'm sorry...it's usually not a good thing when someone feels like how I write in my work because I mostly write sad. Thank you for the praise however. If you ever need to talk, slid into my inbox. I have good listening ears. :) |