World becoming

by Aubrey   Nov 7, 2012


My world becoming grey
the colors turned astray
my heart kept away
my mind spinning out of control
with nothing but a black hole
and never ending thoughts
my heart has been shot
tears can't be shed
because that would mean
I were dead
with nothing but black dust
I do what I must
end this terror with no ending
of happy ever after...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Good suggestion...i will think about it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Blood of a Lion

    I really like this in a sad story kind of way I have one suggestion don't have to do it of course :)

    The last line change ever to Never happily. But again just a suggestion otherwise very somber and nice. 5.5

    For The one and the fairy tale.

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