Seeker of Light

I LOVE THIS!
I love it when you right Nature poems, I cry when I read your sad ones and I melt when you right these love poems, you just have it all, and that is what makes you, you.

The gentleness packs a punch, it is so sweet and lovely to read but it has that depth and grit to it,
AWESOME
x

<3

Maple, this is so lovely, you take us all on such a roller coaster with your poems, the emotion so different but just as strong in each one. This is a heart melter, but for the right reasons, it gives us a smile with a tear!

<3

Ben is right. (Don't get all egocockomanical now!)

The line pauses are perfect.

Each pause granted me a few moments to picture the image that your words painted for me...

And the one line, that just squeezed my heart the most:

"He is the aged symphony of my endless melody."

Small tangent:
When I read I'll just keep on singing forever, I could hear your voice and pictured you the way I saw you in your video...lol

This was beautiful Andrea <3

Wooooow the feelings in this piece are soo pure, that it became so touchinggg.
Perfectly written!!

Hell yes!!!

Now thats a frickin love poem..i love the attention to detail in short line here.

The breaks in the lines rather than in a lump give you that extra bit of time to imagine and relate to what your sayin.

This ooooozes adoration!!!

LOVE IT!