Bad Idea

by MyHalozChokinMe   Nov 8, 2012


Another "bad" idea
shuffling in my head-
smelling like candy;
sweet and intoxicating,
I savor them on
the tongue of
my mind.

Let me chew the
thoughts awhile
before I spit
them out-

Lace up my lips,
bite off the end,
tie a knot and
lick the sweet
idea off
my
chin.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I meant to comment on this poem this morning, but I didn't have the time before work...

    I wrote a quote a few days back... posted it on my profile, about narrow minded people following a bad idea... wrote it in regards to my fellow co workers at work, who would not try and think outside the box in regards to a person we care for... and they were going to snub a really good idea and and follow a bad idea instead.... I decided to remove the quote and place it on the fridge at work... so they would get my message that was intended for them.... this poem's title just made me think of that quote.... this poem is spicy and full of flavor... really a fun piece and I'm sorry for my ramblings... its just the title made me think of the quote I wrote...

    awesome write Cara!

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ok so im back lol

    A million thoughts come to mind when i read this piece.....all of them filthy....and none of them a "bad idea"

    I savor them on
    the tongue of
    my mind.

    ^^^^^
    Hmmmmmmmm ok saaaavoring....toooongue

    Let me chew the
    thoughts awhile
    before I spit
    them out

    ^^^^^^
    Can't even comment on this for fear my profile will get pulled by the mods lol

    Lace up my lips,
    bite off the end,
    tie a knot and
    lick the sweet
    idea off
    my
    chin.

    ^^^^^^^^
    Cara.......you rock my freakin world!

    Very awesome write......thought....idea.....gulp!

    And again...i love the shape :/
    You kill me xxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    At work but sooooooo coming back for this one :)

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