Robins (double dodoitsu)

by Khalid M Darwish   Nov 8, 2012


Robin symphony
A song with each uprising
Dripping wings with each flicker
Glowing red breast under sun

Robin expert dance
Gymnastics from branch to branch
Top professional flying
Praises for the Creator

* Each line is 5/7/7/7

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  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I liked it . what i got from it was the teacher taught the Robin a very valuable lesson and the Robin showed the teacher what he learned and used it to do something great and praised his teacher for all of his help.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Khalid you just melted my heart with this piece! First of all I adore the Doditsu form.... 2nd: Robins are a precious bird.. I named my first born after a Robin bird... so of course I got teary.... and the way you described these wonderful birds just made me freak out in excitement! Love this piece!!!!!!!!