Chelsey!
I swear I'm in total shock over this piece, because it was full of strong images and emotions that were really powerfully displayed, there was a sense of hope, there was a fight in the words and it was really fun to read.
The imagery was strong and the comparisons and metaphors were unique, it flowed perfectly from beginning to end, every line taking something and twisted it, making it unique and interesting.

AMAZEBALLS GIRL! TOTAL SMASHTASTIC, SUPERB WRITING
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xxxxx