Field of dreams

by Chelsey   Nov 8, 2012


If this flirting is more than spontaneous fun,
I'd be overjoyed in silence because I'm afraid
of showing you how often I've thought
about your attractiveness.

You're the first one I can say is
out of my league, but give me the
ball and I promise to knock it
out of the park. I promise to win
you over and never disappoint you.

It's crazy right? To even think of you
this way, but lately my eyes have
opened to your perfection and I can't
help but question, were you made for me?

Your head rests in a city I so long
to sleep in and your laughter
is one I wish to never go a day
without hearing.

Your talent exceeds my ability to
describe my admiration, but when
I watch you, chills tap dance on
my spine and I want to never
stop supporting you.

Your excitement for life has
spiked my curiosity as to what
you plan on doing with it?
Can I come?

Even if not long term, will
you take me on a ride through
your world, because I need a
different adventure?

We don't have to tell,
I can keep you a secret...

All that matters is
your opinion and I pray
it will meet mine in the middle
of a thought provoking
field of dreams.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Chelsey I love how you're writing like countless poems every day! And they just are stronger than ever!!! You go :)
    This was so encouraging, just the inspiration I felt you were writing for this person is uplifting. Truly beautiful and hopeful. I like how it's relatable too, yet you make it your own by making this your dream and no one elses...I've definitely done this with past crushes, thinking of being a part of their lives, and I think it's great you wrote about this. It brought happiness and that longing in my own soul to belong to someone someday in this passionate way.

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Chelz Chelz Chelz... your writing just gets better and better with every new poem... this piece is just delicious, I can not choose just one stanza to say "this is my favorite" because they are all my favorite... the word play in each stanza is wonderful... I've said it before and I'll say it again, you've come a long way baby and you just keep amazing me with every new piece of art you create...

  • 12 years ago

    by Wafaa

    Amazing:') gosh I can relate to this in so many ways I can..n..nn't..eve...even type correctly because of what this piece did to my heart!!

    All the flirting, the crush thing and the need for this person bring back such dear memories..

    I know how hard it is to be attracted to someone who is out of your league..yet still no one can deny the pleasure and joy felt when we're crushing for someone.

    I could feel how much you want him to be with you and you'll do everthing for him if he was yours. Such a beautiful piece full of emotions! another art work from you chels well done xx

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Aww Chelsey this is cute ,

    Go get him girl ;) haha

    Awesome write as per its a really soft write

    I love it

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Damn, my phone battery has a longer duration than your heartbreaks..

    ....and I have a smart phone, with tons of apps.

    if you know what I mean.........................
    ...................

    *dissapears

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