Comments : Lost love

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Genuine Love cares, when there's no need. One closed door, opens a new one.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is a good little poem, however i think it could definitely benefit to have some puctuation. also a lil typo, happy-ness should be happiness. :) just a few helpful suggestions.
    overall, i like this piece. you can truly tell how much you love someone when you put their happiness above your own.

  • 11 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Cute

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Good love poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Thanks:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Euphanasia

    Great poem
    thanks for sharing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Euphanasia

    Great poem
    thanks for sharing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Thanks;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Good Job!!!

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      Thank you:)

  • 11 years ago

    by losing myself

    I liked this poem c: i'll keep reading!

  • 11 years ago

    by Sherwin Talapian

    Very nice :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Walter F Alvarado

    Well written! A few grammar errors but very nice overall. I myself have several poems about lost loves

  • 11 years ago

    by Kazza

    Great work