Comments : Under my lovely belly button

  • 12 years ago

    by LostWords

    Nothing left to say but I am left in awe...

    Amazing job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This poem made me giggle, because I know about these pleasures too, off course!

    Sad that parents make us feel bad things will happen if we indulge in it:)

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Seriously awesome... Ingrid and LW's comment say it all from my side....
    Amazing to have you...
    Always a pleasure to read your poems:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I believe there is alot more woven into this piece than meets the eye on first or second read...that makes me want to re read over and over :) I thin the last stanza says it all. Great poem as always.

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I've always found "belly button" annoying, liked how you used it, though. :)

    "He will help me
    to bring out what is already
    in me."

    This and the ending stood out for me. Beautiful poetry, Karla.