The Birds

I like this poem because I like robins,
my favourite line is the dancing flame.

Beautiful piece MT... I loved the love story... Very pleasing and serene....
Good piece:)

Beautiful MT..

The dancing flame,
tween male and female,
burns a light of reflection.

Then, this line exploding
the essence of romance.

then the last line, as the tree sways in happiness.

U reminded me of BIRD OF PARADISE.

Syrup this is beautiful.....my mum has a robin family in her garden every year around christmas time, their significance is a wonderful thing....i've come down to see her and Alfiechops this weekend and this morning having my smoke and coffee outside i was watching them....and then i come in and read this....as always beautiful write sweet one x

This was beautiful, like Chelsey sad, you always find some other aspect of nature to pen, and it always comes out beautifully.
There is a story to your writing, and a scene that is cast into my mind, the imagery is always so great.

Lovely lovely poetry, beautiful Andrea
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