Comments : The Birds

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Hahaha!!! Amaaaaazinggg!!!! Oh this is what really happens in my farm, It's right on the swaying branches the male looks for the slightly wistling female then starts singing with different tunes. BTW, I tried several times to cultivate the male but it soon becomes weak after being caught and tends to die. Really, you rocked it Andrea.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    You'll never run out of nature poems to write...and I love that! So refreshing to read <3

    Not sure how you do it, but you pen beautiful stories, different words always, and its fascinating. You make nature be perceived in a way I've never perceived it. Awesome write :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was beautiful, like Chelsey sad, you always find some other aspect of nature to pen, and it always comes out beautifully.
    There is a story to your writing, and a scene that is cast into my mind, the imagery is always so great.

    Lovely lovely poetry, beautiful Andrea
    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Syrup this is beautiful.....my mum has a robin family in her garden every year around christmas time, their significance is a wonderful thing....i've come down to see her and Alfiechops this weekend and this morning having my smoke and coffee outside i was watching them....and then i come in and read this....as always beautiful write sweet one x

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Beautiful MT..

    The dancing flame,
    tween male and female,
    burns a light of reflection.

    Then, this line exploding
    the essence of romance.

    then the last line, as the tree sways in happiness.

    U reminded me of BIRD OF PARADISE.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Beautiful piece MT... I loved the love story... Very pleasing and serene....
    Good piece:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Abbie

    I like this poem because I like robins,
    my favourite line is the dancing flame.