Comments : Overcast

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I have just read you other piece "Facials" and the contrast between the two pieces is amazing, there so different, the tones and the mood.

    This piece was creative as well though, and still expressive, just totally different, it was deep and strong, heart wrenching and inquisitive.

    awesome girl :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    I agree with Tara here... your poems always have the tendency to reflect a different life with each of them:)
    Keep writing gal:)
    You rock!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I definitely have an overcast in my life! Ugh. I know EXACTLY what you mean here.

    LOVE the third stanza... seriously amazing.

    Also really like "remembering what your electrifying words did to my soul" ... ugh, like a lightning bolt right to my heart.

    Wonderful write, as always.