Comments : Facials

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Not only was the creative and really expressive, it was beautiful and moving, as though you had found the one that you wanted to give you affection to, you wanted to love them, it felt really sensual as well.

    You really moved me with poem, with the way it was worded, with such gentleness. Lovely Chels :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    Hahahaha, I loved it! I guess those classes are poetically useful as well aren't they?!

    I have to admit that when I read the title and the category of this poem I was like "Huh?" but then as I started to read it through it I got it!you are so creative you know, and you used just the right wording and emotions to pen this piece so beautifully.

    "to embrace your smile in the
    center of my hands."
    ^^
    This has got to be one of the most capturing lines I read, AMAZING !!

    xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    You are a gem Chels.... This is so outstanding... Fabulous!! This was much like a soothing poem for me... I feel like getting a facial done now... lol....
    seriously your words create magic:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Okay, I'm 100% positive that anyone could give you any topic and you could create a beautiful, elegant poem out of it! Like, my God woman! Share some of this creativity with me! hahaha

    You used the perfect word choices for every stanza... soothing just like a facial!