HOLY....MOSES!!!

Dude....listen, I dont even think Ive read a poem like this, and if I have, I never use to like them so I'd just ignore it...

I LOVED THIS...I feel like it needs a different category..too be honest, like under love! You were fighting for your woman in this piece and I loved the whole battle seen this played out...LOVEDDDDD the Caps lock on your last line!!! All I saw was you charging with a sword in the air screaming that...brilliant imagery..

As my vision fades...
I can see her face...
And the tears that fall...
I can't die here...
Not without her...

^^ literally, this made me a bit teary eyed and also made me smile...I think thats adorable...

Again, I don't think this should be a dark poem because their is an awesome love story your are trying to hide here...excellent!

I loved it as well, some parts made me tear up, and i smiled too, just plain outright AWESOME! (: