Comments : Chimera

  • 12 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    This is still a lullaby to me...

    And I'm gunna give breaking it down ago tomorrow, when I get my laptop back.... You may want to get a gun ready.. As I may screw up lol

    Edit; Right,

    This is what I see...

    I used to dream of touching people with song...
    As music is a great passion of mine and it moves me in ways you can not imagine...
    but things didn't pan out as I'd hoped.
    Now I use my voice to hum the tranquil melodies or tempestuous notes, to set the tone for my cerebral lyric explosions, as I grace paper with a pen.

    Now at 35 years of age, I find myself wanting the simple things of life...
    Yet longing for the simplicity of this dream, has proven a long hard journey.
    Letting go of a past that has moulded and shaped the person I am today...

    Haunted by the other DNA in my beautiful girls...
    Whilst trying to bring them up, to love, honour and respect themselves... And there own lives, as much as the people that surround them.

    I'd never truly felt accepted for everything that I am...
    Just pushed, pulled and prodded to conform, to the point of feeling alienated in my own skin...
    I longed to feel love, at peace and at home with myself.

    You, I never saw coming!!
    You, I didn't want to believe!!
    But you, took a beaten soul, with a cold cynical shielded heart... And ignited a fire!
    A fire so ferocious, it has made my entire being glow.
    You've made me see, I'm not my monstrous title...
    That I am worthy of being loved;
    and by doing so...
    You've given me the courage to show I have so much love to give in return.

    You reminded me that I am worthy of my dreams...simple or not,
    and being me is more than enough.
    By loving my heart, you freed me...

    .... I look forward to writing the rest of OUR chapters together.

    • 12 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      *COCKED*

    • 12 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      Natasha-

      This time, it is I that sits here with a smile on my face.

      Your uncanny, freakish ability to understand me rings true in your interpretation of my write.

      You've managed to sum up all the bits and pieces that sat unsaid in between the lines of my metaphoric rambling, broke right through the poetic defense mechanism that I am so accustomed to using.

      Truly, I am amazed by you.

      You are one of two people that have managed to bring me to tears, and I love you and hate you for it at the same time. (Meant in the best possible way.)

      <3

      EDIT: I meant to mention last night, that you are the only person that connected the metaphoric dots between the title of this poem and "my monster."

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I adore the openness in this piece, you lay your dreams out and.....just.....well....i find something very special about this piece, it really touches me xx

    You kill me you know that dont you?

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    You were so creative with this one, I loved your approach and how you put it all together to make this. I liked the added info in brackets, this is a trick of yours that works very well and i love when you use it.

    The meaning of the poem and courgae in it and hope is so inspiring, thank you for sharing it and I think you done an awesome job <3 xxx