Comments : Notions

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I love this.....really love it.....you wreck me...

    " craves the opportunity
    for your fingers to fill the spaces between
    mine, for you to tell me that you need me"

    ^^^^^
    Sigh.....i mean seriously.....because i know how strong a person you are..how independant, this bit made me weak:/ that you yearn for this to be said shows the depth of your feelings and how you've embrace this love.....awesome.

    And those last five lines???? Sometimes i think. You are trying to kill me with your writes " the pen is mightier than the sword" came to mind after the fifth or tenth i read this.......you slayed me with those lines.....

    Just an awesome write Cara.....killed me, wrecked me, chewed me up, spat me out.....then just enveloped me in luuuurve!!!

    Freakin perfect xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I really love this one, that is someone very special to have and how you write about it is so romantic. The bond is very strong and there is nothing better than knowing when something is meant to be because it feels right.

    <3 this one.