Solecism

by MyHalozChokinMe   Nov 10, 2012


You live a sheltered life.

Your screen: the lens through
which you experience the world.

The blues and greens of your
HDTV are reality personified
for your entertainment.

What need have you for
fresh pastures and the
warmth of the sun?

Why break the hold and erase
your artificial existence?

To try would be futile.

Your days are long and your
nights are endless.

Your world cocooned in the
smog of Modern Frailty.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    :))))

    Double post lol...musta got excited :/

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    :))))

    I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS WRITE!!!!

    I have a passion, to hate most people who spend their days sitting in front of a tv screen scrambling their brains with the rubbish slowly and steadily pumped into them, it slowly turns their brains to mush and kills any desire to experience 'real life' for themselves living their life through their remote control........sorry mini tangent lol

    I was gonna comment on the word choice and grammer and flow etc ....but whats the point eh? You words are always flawless :))

    Wicked write babe xx

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