OMG! Ammmreenn...
This is just 'end of discussion. The feelings it swirled through me is like waves. Very true and filled with realities spark. A meaningful message it carries and conveyed exquisitely with well choosen words.
This is my 2nd nomination to marry a poem in P&Q. Wish one can marry poetry. I'd have sent my ring asap, may the best poem win the race, *winks*. Lol..

Our emotions emanates our actions when words fail us we choose to convey our thoughts oherwise. It relates to our feelings and exhibits what we want or desire. As you know the truelty in the saying, 'actions speak louder than words'. Am saying this because its our strong feelings that births emotion, hence it'll birth our action. So they work together, complementing each other.
Its an irony to our believe that our outburst relates all we're going through by mere emotions. As such it carries an in depth strength about all happening around us. In life what we convey as an outllook is who we are in reality. Thus, carving a niche to exist within the perimeter of our creed and individual purpose.

I love the imagery I envisage in this piece. A mirage in my mind. Very well thought out and beautifully crafted. I really really loved this.
Definitely a nomination for this next week because I've already exhausted my votes.
Bon Travail! *claps*

Emotions are much faster in transmitting our thoughts to another person. They are direct actions which skip the words, reaching the target, and hereby submitting the required message we want where words remains neglected. This frequently happens in deep relatiionships where both parts no longer need words.
Really nice piece 5/5

TRying to pen our emotions is sometimes hard but you have done it well in this piece. Very nice poem Amreen

I really liked these lines... "Tears drain
the water of sadness
washing away
the cry in your words....
Laughter flies away
the birds of happiness
which fail to build a shelter
on the nest of your words...."
nice piece!
5/5

Emotions do alter our words. Sometimes when your upset, words won't come out... or we are afraid to say what is truly making us cry. When we're mad, we usually say things we don't truly mean... and happiness, sometimes we say more than we should and it could turn into being the reason why we cry. It's a never ending process dealing with our emotions.

I love this piece, it's so true.

I loved this Amreen.Fascinating!

I really like this Amreen! Great job, as usual. 5/5

I can so relate to this piece... sometimes my emotions are so strong, that I end up creating a piece that confuses the reader.. Its difficult to do sometimes, its best for me to take an hour to relax before I write... this poem was really lovely to read...

Yes, agree with you 100% Isn't it weird what emotions do to us? Isn't it weird all the circumstances that can make us cry and what crying proves in each situation...we are weak, we are strong, we are kind hearted, we are angry, it means so much...

very interesting topic to write about Amreen. Lovely piece!

Really great . very deep and true.

Sometimes words lose their charm
when emotions swirl around the soul
you want to speak your heart
but at times you could only emote...

- I could relate to this opening right now, sometimes I can express myself through words and poetry and it is a great release of what is inside. However sometimes when the emotions are either too much, too strong or just too confusing, we can feel numb and there are no words to express this.

Tears drain
the water of sadness
washing away
the cry in your words....

- this is such a touching verse, to think of the tears coming through your words, but then at the same time if you cannot express your words then no one will see your tears or your sadness.

Laughter flies away
the birds of happiness
which fail to build a shelter
on the nest of your words....

- this is such a unique idea, using the birds and the nest to represent the sadness you feel and the hopelessness of feeling any better. I could imagine the birds flying away with your happiness and it feels like they are never coming back with it.

Sometimes emotions
embraces
the beauty of your speech,
sometimes emotions carry
more warmth than the calmness in words,
sometimes emotions steal the love filled in words,
sometimes emotions break the tranquility
stored in the serenity of words....

- this ending says so much, all of it true but you really express so much about our emotins and what they can do for us and to us.

Keep on writing.

This is very true. Sometimes, words just aren't enough and could be easily misunderstood; where emotions are universal. Great poem! Keep it up!

Well...see...even now I'm speechless to comment on your poem!?!lol
I can relate to this piece cuz it is said that "words are few to pour out our emotions". Our emotions are so powerful and strong that our words go swallowed in it and, thus, emotions over-shadow our words...
So good a poem! Thanks for sharing it here and letting us read!
5/5

This is an extremely awesome poem, I adore it, has so much deep meaning, that screams out to anyway who couldn't give their emotions justice

Loved the way it all flows so beautifuly! :) trully gifted! :) and this is very true in life words are just words but in the end the emotions betray the lies in the words so very beautiful! :) LOVED this poem! :)... i'm an emotional person so that should tell you how i work with emotions lol 5/5

Queen Ash

Love it! It speaks such truth...as much as I would like to think that my words can always express how I'm feeling, sometimes my emotions are indescribable. Well-done!