by Emmanuel Pineda Nov 10, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
She floats through streets and weeps sweep, |
by Xanthe
Beautiful piece. Really captures the legend of the weeping woman. Loved that you chose to write in the third person point of view; I find it quite clever as I could just imagine the persona watching the woman's ghost himself and speaking of, then to her. Simple rhymes yet they are very well-executed. Reminds me of classical poems. Truly enjoyed this. Keep writing. |