Rapture is, Your Presence, Divine!!! (A Quatern)

by Robert Gardiner   Nov 11, 2012


Rapture is, Your Presence, Divine!!! (A Quatern)

Rapture is, Your Presence, Divine,
Nothing Matches, Your Rhapsody.
Enchanted, is this Heart, of Mine,
Enamored, with Such Ecstasy.

No Greater Pleasure, I could find.
Rapture is, Your Presence, Divine.
I'm Exhilarated, by you, Left On, Cloud Nine
Every Part Of Me, Besotted, Stupefied.

You Leave Me, Breathless, Every Time,
Captured, by you, In Everyway.
Rapture is, Your Presence, Divine,
And by you, I'm, So Amazed.

With Wonder, You just, Drunken Me.
I'm Intoxicated, By Your Magic, Sublime,
Infatuated, Fancied, In A Frenzy.
Rapture is, Your Presence, Divine.

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

Quatern: A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I adore the Quatern form... and Robert you penned this piece with elegance... Very pretty!

    Love your repeating line... sighs... beautiful!

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Thank god i can now do this again.........

    NOMINATED all freakin day long !!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Robert my friend as always you write with such elegance and poise, thiss is one of my favourites from you.

    I love just everything about it.

    Awesome job squire!

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Excellent Robert, the repitition works really well in this, you write some excellent formed poetry.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    You make this look easy so I am going to try it. Very nice formed poem Robert...Sounds like somebody got bit by the love bug lol XXX
    Lostlove