Comments : 48

  • 12 years ago

    by frozen rose

    Wow. this poem is amazing. i love all of the detail, especally, "A flower is not a flower.
    It is an illusion floating toward the mirror" good job. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by LostWords

    Goodness, you are a beautiful writer. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Unique as always your poetry stands out like a rose amongst dandelions. <3 you

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WOWWW Karla this is such an intriguing piece, I had to read it a couple times so I could keep dwelling on it...You know what I liked best? Which is weird, but I liked your use of "whatever"....kind of uncommon in poetry because its almost slang, the way its used, and it kind of makes your statement more real, showing just a little bit of frustration...I enjoyed that!!

    I get what you are saying here, but I have to disagree with one thing..you ARE a poet/ poetess, whatever :P Youre an incredible writer, one I will forever admire.

    Loved this