by frozen rose
Wow. this poem is amazing. i love all of the detail, especally, "A flower is not a flower. |
by LostWords
Goodness, you are a beautiful writer. 5/5 |
by Lostlove1
Unique as always your poetry stands out like a rose amongst dandelions. <3 you |
by Chelsey
WOWWW Karla this is such an intriguing piece, I had to read it a couple times so I could keep dwelling on it...You know what I liked best? Which is weird, but I liked your use of "whatever"....kind of uncommon in poetry because its almost slang, the way its used, and it kind of makes your statement more real, showing just a little bit of frustration...I enjoyed that!! |