Damn. This is so intense and the rhyme flowed well. Great job. 5/5

Nice rhyme sad story.

Nice rhme indeed. I loved the ending.

Good choice of words...
Good rhyme and u wrapped up the poem with a powerful note/tone :To end her life was your choice
But you dont have an option to say bye
Because you already left her to die
Which is exactly what she did when you said farewell
She's stuck in her prison of lonely hell

This is a great love poem if it is a lost love. I love tragic endings to any poems. I again love the story feel to this as it is a down fall of someone. The rhyming was great as always. 5.