by Larry Chamberlin Nov 11, 2012
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The poppy fields of West India and Burma provided England fodder for opium dens in China. The Qing emperor lost the war to keep it out and gave Britain a nearly empty scrabbly island in the South China Sea as compensation. When the sun waves goodbye for the year, winds trap air in the north cradle of that island where millions live in a tiny crescent lodged between the harbour and mountains behind. It appears as if all the opium smoke in China has come to repose there with the haute couture of ex pats where nothing happens without popping a cork. |
by Darren
Just as I comment on Khalids, I find where he found his idea from, |
The Haibun form was popularized by Matsuo Basho who primarily used it for travel accounts. However, I see no reason the format could not be used with Senryu or perhaps even Tanka. |
Great poem Larry! This is rather a strange form of poetry... but in a good way! I like the travel pose of this poem... it was so clear and well-written... and then the haiku was great! |
Really nice Larry! I hope to make a similar trial like this. This is really challenging. |