This Is The End

Amidst the chaos of words
and metaphors, somewhere
in between the lines of rhymes
and non-rhymes
- I found you ..

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This is a great opener because it leaves the reader wondering...who is she talking to....my opinion...you're talking to yourself?

And with that pen of yours
I was lost; not to be found,
sometimes in a lyrical melody
other times in a rebellious sea
of emotions. But never was I
able to easily escape the world
you create with words.

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If I'm on the right track and you are questioning yourself then you have done a great job with this stanza...only thing I would check is the word *create* because everything else in in past tense here?

Remember when I once read
my name somewhere in your
library of thoughts? You called
me your poetess; your inspiration.
Nestled in the tenderness of your
words; I felt like I was finally home.

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I love the use of 'library of thoughts' but I stumbled over the word Ã"nce "...me with my accent perhaps but..it didn't seem necessary?

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My poet, this may be the last
time my lines carry your name,
the last time my poetry speaks
to you. I don't know if it's in fact
you that I am leaving behind, or it's
the writer in me. But until we meet
again, until I learn how to hold that
pen again; just remember...

*in fact* ? should this be one word...infact? honestly..I'm not sure so ask someone else about this please?

Really enjoyed this...your poetry is becoming more enjoyable the more I read it...keep it up!!!

Amazing... I am lost in your words... You are superb with this thought.... I have read all your poems I think, which talk about this guy... you create magic with every word...
Wonderful!!!