Comments : The Twig

  • 12 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    Ugh Andrea-

    There is a sad but beautiful tone and flow to this piece.

    "I am balanced on nothing and held by everything and everyone I hold dear to my soul..."

    *tears in my eyes*

    xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This is utterly beautiful, and was a nice thing to read after a long day at work so thank you for penning this piece, with that nature tone that you incorporate and the gentle sadness that is in this piece but the spirit and love that you also balance well.

    hugs you
    xxx <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Beautiful shape and gud written

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    I just can't believe that twig holds your big ole butt... LOL...

    Seriously though... this is beautifully penned with a touch of saddness, yet has a sense of peacefulness...

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Giggles!!! Only you Ang!! that was wonderful and made me smile!! ha ha

    thank you everyone :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Haha... glad it made you smile... that's what I was aiming for!! hugs you

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Andrea, I felt that poem is dripping drop by drop into my mind while I was feeling thirsty for emotions.

    ^^^
    You filled my cup with swaying words while I was resting on my swing!

    Now I'll be getting asleep because of that.

    ****

    Your words injected me with anethesia of a so unique type.

    ***

    First don't awake me of a so sweet dream

    Second you may get inspired by my words to pen your next piece.

    I adore this piece that pulled my neck and took my heart away.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    You bring life to every element through your words MT... Powerful piece.... Loved it:)