Wow... Simply wow... You have defined love your own way here chels.. And its simply adorable:)
You stole my heart with this:)

Ughhh, You are brilliant!
You always find new ways of writing the same thing, it is so creative, that is what I adore about your poetry is the metaphors and the way you relate feelings to something else like a place or object, it is so unique and every time I read a poem from you, I get carried away to a different place every time while still sensing the same feelings.

Love it, so gentle yet so powerful, that assurance and strength that just oozes out is breathtaking

mwah xx

This was beautiful Chels. it flowed along beautifully although a bit long I did not get bored reading it...You have emptied your heart onto the screen and I do hope you find what you are looking for.
This is honest and fresh love poetry...

Much love
Lostlove

Hey Chels, your poem is stellar.Loved it.

This is just beautiful... I'll instantly fall in love if this was written for me..lol.. Its just too beautiful.

What a wonderful piece. much luck and love to you. I am new here and im looking forward to express my thoughts/fantasy also.

Beautiful and well written, simple and elegant.

Loved it and the title. The title is unique. 5/5