Comments : Temporary Sun

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I am so loving these pieces by you Chelsey, the way you write is phenomenal, the way you make me get into your world, the imagery is awesome, so sensual and captivating...
    this was utterly beautiful with a little hint of sadness amongst all that...

    Just awesome girl, you totally rock :)
    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is so heart warming Chelsey...there's not much more I can say about this piece. I love the flow, how you so effortlessly touch the heart and make each word have its own grace. You have such a generous desire to have the sun warm you when you are not around.....but to always be that reminder of you. I think that's incredible. The ending made me sigh- because the sun won't be needed then, you two will be united and you will have become all that she has impressed on you.

    Beautiful of course! Thanks for sharing :]

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    What the hell was that girl??????
    OOOMMMMGGGG!!!!!!

    Loving every single bit of it! The emotions, the wordings, the atmosphere, the whole thing!

    You are a mastermind you know that?

    <3333

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Awwwww meme I love you babe. .... so easy to write these when i have someone who inspires them <3..perhaps I'll tell ya all about it soon hehe

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    You are the sun of poems for me

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is so thoughtful.. Stunning:)