Set us free, a children poem

by Ole Carsten   Nov 14, 2012


Rain, rain,
Give us rain
Or we will be in pain

Free, free,
Set us free, free
From schools slavery.

Run, run,
Allow us to run,
Running is such fun

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very cute little poem, nice work. I think many people at school will agree to this.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Allow us run,

    ^^ I think it should be " allow us TO run"

    The part about school slavery took my attention lol.
    Many times did I look at the clock just hoping that it was time to go home. So it dis brought back good memories.

    • 12 years ago

      by Ole Carsten

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      right it is corrected, I am thrilled you guys and girls like this poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I didn't expect lol... I know that feeling, all too well. You're in class, feeling like a slave... until the bell rings, then there is this jungleeee! :D

    "flashbacks in memories" XD

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