Comments : Set us free, a children poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I didn't expect lol... I know that feeling, all too well. You're in class, feeling like a slave... until the bell rings, then there is this jungleeee! :D

    "flashbacks in memories" XD

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Allow us run,

    ^^ I think it should be " allow us TO run"

    The part about school slavery took my attention lol.
    Many times did I look at the clock just hoping that it was time to go home. So it dis brought back good memories.

    • 12 years ago

      by Ole Carsten

      To

      right it is corrected, I am thrilled you guys and girls like this poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very cute little poem, nice work. I think many people at school will agree to this.