I really liked this you gave the same message as
Me that you should make your dreams come
True , this reminded me of what a perfect world
Would be like that sadly , probley won't exist

Awesome write :)

I love your determination to find happiness in your future even after all you've been through in life. You are a true inspiration. (:

This almost read like a fairytale. It was light-hearted and hopeful, but not too hopeful. I get the impression that you believe you can be happy again one day, but you know the difficult journey you have until you have completely overcome the pain and that's what's bringing an inkling of false hope, of fear to mind when you are writing this.

The ending is absolutely remarkable, as it shows your defiance of fate - you WILL make the most of your life, because you are a determined young woman.

I like to see this positive write come from your mind Saffie. An intriguing title you have chosen also. Well penned.

Five/five