Comments : The Nomad

  • 12 years ago

    by Mr Universe

    This poem really gets across the feeling of alienation. "...taking root in/nothing but his own sense of self" Brilliant line. Great write.

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    "Some men were meant to live alone" IDK its pretty philosophical. I think its safer to say we are all alone in our own way. All of us stuck in a body of flesh and bones never really ever genuinely being able to truly connect to another mind. How do we know if a man was meant to live alone or just a failure at being able to live with somebody? The Bible says its not good for man to be alone, and I believe it!

    • 11 years ago

      by Anonymous

      Thanks for the comment! I changed "some men" to "this man"

      This is a fictional character, in a fictional reality.

      I took the loneliness I felt at that moment and immortalized it.

      I don't know about other men, but I was not meant to live alone.

      I love philosophy.