Mr. U !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is so IN YOUR FACE!

Love this!

Its honest and blunt... the rhyme scheme is brilliant in my eyes... Powerful piece indeed!

Ohhhh this poem pisses me off to no end.....

No not the poem, I should say the story...this happens all the time, the spouses of service men and women are so focused on getting pleasure, they can't wait for their spouse to return, and ruin a marriage/family. Totally ridiculous. No loyalty anymore.

Lovely piece. Very blunt, flowed freely. :)

Wow. So blunt, I love it. Rhyming was excellent and this is a sad, all too true story that happens too often. Great job! :)

I'm not good at writing things that i can't personally relate to but looks like you are......... as Jack Black says, "Nailed it" Actually I do have one like this about betrayal "These Eyes" and "These Words"

U r such an amazing writer! I love your works, this poem has rhyming down to perfection! It is well balanced and well penned, keep writing!