Comments : Let's Write a Story

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I liked this , but it seems to be more cute , then passion when you talk about Romeo and Juliet , they define love , I loved the word choice and the idea ,
    I just felt it lack abit of emotion , some parts could of been more powerful , this is just my opinion tho :)

    Well penned

    • 12 years ago

      by Craig Rose

      Thanks for the input! I was definitely trying to be a little bit more on the cute side, but since I was talking about fairytales I absolutely had to include Romeo and Juliette. Thanks again :)