Rain

Great work, Abbie. Your daddy was right: you are indeed gifted:)

I love how you take a distance and describe the scene as if you were not a part of it..and the question is one I would not have expected from a girl your age.

Well done, missy!

5/5 Ingrid

Abbie- I've read many pieces on rain, but none that lifted my spirits as much as this elegant piece did.. I love your rhyme pattern in the middle and end... it made the poem flow while reading... very pretty!

A beautiful composition dear.. Its simple yet the last line is thoughtful... Lovely:)

My gods babe you got some talent just pacing around inside you don't you? I wish i could write poems like this, honestly the only kind of poem i seem to be able to write are sad ones. SO you are a gifted young lady.. hope to read more soon

So true, even the sky weeps. 5/5