Faith on Fire

by ah satan 666   Nov 17, 2012


So I'm told...
Its the good that die young.

Well I have a questions?!

When the young die... the living break.
Spending most of there existence longing to be reunited.
Trying to fill an endless void.
How has the young dying, ever been a good thing?

If heaven is so beautiful,
"perfect"...
Why do you persist with stealing
from the world below?

If you are the great almighty man
So many preach about...
Why do you not intervene,
for sake of good?

Ironically.
The thought of you,
turns any faith that is
in me; To twisted inception.
Like the dying ova,
that's awaited sperm for
conception.

I would rather take my chances,
on a blood sealed dotted line...

For it is you, I see as the bastard.
Not the Devil.

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  • 12 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    The one thing that initially drew me to your writes (and still does,) is your fookin attitude and boldness in your writing...

    "So I'm told...
    Its the good that die young.

    Well I have a questions?!"

    You're GD right you do.

    There is so much fire and frustration in this poem and I found myself reading with my own attitude...

    Your questions...are the exact kinds of questions that my mind has..

    "If heaven is so beautiful,
    "perfect"...
    Why do you persist with stealing
    from the world below?

    If you are the great almighty man
    So many preach about...
    Why do you not intervene,
    for sake of good?"

    And my nerdy side so loved and appreciated the reference to twisted inception, dying ova and awaited sperm!

    Gah.

    I can't say enough about this write..

    Just know that in my mind, I could see you toe to toe, finger to chest, while making this clear:

    "For it is you, I see as the bastard.
    Not the Devil."

    I recognize the sad tone to this write, but I think the anger, disgust and frustration speaks much louder and I fookin love it.

    Into my fave's, my spitfire!

    THE SHIZ.

    And while this won't be everyone's cup of fkn tea..
    (and as if i give a shyt)
    I think it's nomination worthy.
    <3

    P.S.
    My apologies in taking so long to get to this. I wanted to wait until I was back to my right state of being. <3

    • 12 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Thank you both :)

      I don't think they nominate for ranting when your in an... "Off mood" lol but thank you missy <3 x

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    O-M-F-G!!!!

    Now this is one powerful piece....i had to take a breathe at the end!

    I love the tone of this write, how these questions tug at those who have a boxed "faith" and how the questions ultimately have answers that almost none of us like.

    It was the end line that did it for me...if we are to take these things at face value at least the Devil does what it says on his tin......where as God, whilst revered to be all good all powerful and omnipresent, seemingly stands by while the young, innocent are taken and wrecked.

    I suppose thats where "faith" comes into it to have faith that these things are for the best and to "trust" in his design.......thats a BIG ask, for me anyway.

    You title was perfect and i love this write very sad though it is.

    X

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