Comments : Winter haiku

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Should the title be Winter instead of "Winther"? Also, I think it looks better if the title would be "Winter (Haiku)" that way it lets the reader know it's a haiku but it's not part of the title. Just a suggestion, though.

    Nice little haiku, I enjoyed it. Although, I'm not too fond of winter myself... I hate the cold :/ haha.

  • 12 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    I love the beauty of it changing from Autumn to Winter and the snow :D

    "Changing season again"
    ^^This is 6 syllables, it should only be 5.

    But it's a lovely picture you painted.