I really liked the philosophy behind this poem.

This a a very good poem. We are never satisfied with what we have and question His ways and wills! And this poem, as i understood it, deals with this theme.
I like the way how u have divided the poem into two parts. It is significant of impatient and unending human needs (that is the first part of the poem, where so many questions arise) and God's answer and His ways (second part of the poem). From another point of view, the poem can be understood as two distinct elements, i.e. worldly and spiritual needs, of man's life.

Well written! Keep it up!
5/5