Dehydrate

by Maple Tree   Nov 18, 2012


I submitted a whisper
upon negativity's ear,
bound to a kingdom
of nothingness,
silence carved
his initials
upon the words
that dehydrated
from my tongue.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Seriously thoughtful and I liked the world you create with such a small piece... !! Amazing:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Spot on with your interpretation Hellon.... awesome! and thank you..

  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    I see this poem as some sort of prayer that you feel has, so far, been unaswered?

    You have said this prayer so many times that your tongue has become dehydrated while you await an answer and yet....you will do it over and over? Just my interpretation...

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow Maple, such powerful words. Love this one <3 I can relate to this one very much.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Not anything I could say to make sense...(see?)

    This is AMAZEBALLS!!!!!!

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