by Baby Rainbow
I think this is a senryu and not a haiku. |
by Jenni
I agree with Baby Rainbow about the classification of this poem: although the form itself is equal, both requre the same amount of syllables in these three lines yet they are called differently. Haikus deal with nature and although the crow is part of that, I'd say that this aspect doesn't dominate. |
by Maple Tree
Craig: You wrote a very deep and dark poem in regards to the crow... I truley enjyed it... however your second line needs some tweaking.... I understand why you wrote "do not" |
by Craig Rose
Can I use that line? =) I was in a bit of a hurry when I wrote this. It was one of those moments where an idea comes to you at the worst possible time, and you scribble stuff down on the back of a candy wrapper lol |
by Maple Tree
You sure can Craig... I hear ya on being in a hurry... I've written poems down on the envelopes of bills and grocery recites ha ha |