A snake? (a haiku)

I love snakes and think they can be cute at times...kinda like your poem here

A good Haiky always has an element of surprise in the last sentence, and yours had! Real clever wording, Abbie:)

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

I smiled to myself. Well done.

Abbie
I loved this nature poem and am especially fond of haiku poetry. This was a very good one :) sometimes sticks CAN look like snakes!! Great job

This is indeed one clever haiku.. I like the imagery creation in just 3 lines and also that often when the snake lies still, we misinterpret it to be a stick and you have portrayed it well.. And the alliteration as LP mentioned adds a poetic touch... Excellent piece little girl..:)