My Liberty Stamp... (Acrostic V's Dotoitsu)

by ah satan 666   Nov 18, 2012


Loving is part and parcel,
illuminating a heart
for all to see, forever
enriched... burns my fire.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    It's really difficult to write like this, well tried...

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Natasha,
    to write in both these forms is a tricky thing, because you have to find a four letter word and then incorporate the syllable count to make the Doditsu, now, you did this brilliant, in choosing a simple word and adding a catchy title, you wrote a short piece that was really nice...
    our world in which we live is full of greatness, pride, but also there is much heartache and to read a poem on the finer things just really is a joy.

    Well done you :)