Fallen

by MyHalozChokinMe   Nov 19, 2012


Our lips pressed close, I breathe in the
breath you have pushed from your chest.

I stare, lost in a pool of liquid blue.

I am caught in the passion behind, the
laughter there, falling more deeply into
this love that I cannot describe with words.

A feeling unbound by laws of space or time.

Your penetrating gaze devours me,
swallowing me whole.

I release inhibitions, fears, all the things
that have held me here, and fall...

into joy,

into peace,

into a place where we
exist as only love.

I have let go-

I have fallen,

into you,

into love,

into

us.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ok, soooo im back...after reading it like a hundred times :/

    This write babe has seriously wrecked me, not just because of the emotions of love in it, how you describe a kiss and how love has over taken you but also how you allowed that to happen, with things in our past it can be difficult....nay on impossible for us to allow these feelings to emerge and flourish....

    To leave our selves open to someone can be a hard thing but to do that and embrace it fully is nothing short of epic (in the true sense of the word)

    This write to me is awesome, not just for the things said but also for the unsaid things and it wrecks me ...totally xxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Im at work and snuck on for a quick read....and now i can't concentrate and swoooooning somewhat :/

    I'll be back for a proper comment x

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