The summer evening

by Mohan   Nov 19, 2012


Summer evening
I reached the cottage on the mountain
Greys clouds
covered the mountain

Thunder playing the drums
Little storm trying to break my window
I can see the falls only
through my window

Moisture air kissing my face
without any address
Flowers flying like feathers
Cute rain outside

Colorful birds returning their nests
with a humming sound
What a perfect melody!
Wonderful scenery in my life

I forgot my city life
and my busy life
Nothing is great
more than a nature

this is my first attempt in this style..

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Nice attempt, you captured nature and your journey outside the city.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Very soothing and beautiful... the imagery is enchanting...
    Good attempt:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Thank you

  • 11 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Very nice for a first attempt. You were really able to capture the poetry of nature. Keep working at it!